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coffee house

by 庞潇怡

Final Rating: 2.68. Finished #161 out of 201 entries.

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Animator

庞潇怡

Experience

sophomore

Time Taken

Ten days

Description

In front of a vintage coffee shop.The two men met in front of the cafe and had a series of conversations.There was a small disagreement between the two, and a conversation ensued.

Tags
2D

Comments

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Aaron Clement

Camera needs to be motivated on the cuts. And why is it cutting to the character who isn't talking?

Parker Rodormer

Too much blinking!

Jaime Santana

Needs more body animation.