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How Exciting
by Sarah Gaygen
He's the trash man!
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Lee
nice work!
Just a few suggestions.
It feels a bit tweeny overall. maybe put it on 2's? and adjust some of the timings a bit.
the fabric on her cape is shrinking
I feel like adding in more arcs when she does her big movements would look really nice.
The camera floating around feels off you could keep it steady, cut to her closeup then truck out when the rabbit guy stabe her bubble.
The rabbit guys eye direction looks a little bit high around fr 237 when his eyes are fully opened so he's looking over her head instead of at her eyes, and his pupil disappears when he blinks.
Samantha Koffler
Absolutely ADORE your style--super well done!!
Rhys Hewison
Too much camera shake, cutting to characters might be better.