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Need for Speed.
In the year 2027, a couple is cruising along the highway via a flying car. Vicky wants to speed things up but unfortunately, the steering wheel is on Glen's hands and not hers.
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Adele
I love this one, the style is great, and the animation really good! If I had to nitpick, I'd say that some head turns weren't necessary, that makes five in just eleven seconds, it can get a bit jarring in the end. They're really well made, though!
Lee
Looks really nice!
small suggestions/thoughts ahead.
-There are a couple of spots where a black line pops over the girl character when she says "you're an exciting guy".
-I think the car would work better if there was a bit of overlap on the flappy bits, instead of all moving to the same timing.
-The secondary on the car changes speeds when you cut to the last angle (I like the speedy one better).
-Maybe give the guy a tiny wheel cycle to make it look like he's driving.
-When she reaches for the button have her elbow clear the seat before it layers behind it, so it doesn't pop through it.
-when the car goes past over top it slows down a bit at the end, it might work better if it was consistant, or speeding up since its getting closer.
Overall really great work!
Samantha Koffler
AWESOME concept--amazing spin on the audio. Well done!!
Monika
Too much repetitive movements (the head shakes)