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May entry

by Conan Sinclair

Final Rating: 5.13. Finished #56 out of 135 entries.

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Animator

Conan Sinclair

Experience

a few years

Time Taken

2 weeks

Description

My entry to the may comp

Comments

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K.Rice

Nice attempt...could do with some variation...very floaty

Joshua D

I like it a lot, my only thing is I would of loved to see a second character, but still, good job.

Carol Trezena

I think it would help the animation to work a bit more with spacing (specially accommodations) and micro expressions variations with moving holds (the work of Joshua Schneider is a great reference to study!).
Adding a few blinks in the animation would also make it feel more organic and natural, but overall I like the main poses, specially in the "is now yours" part.