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Doll´s conversation
by Olga Cauqui
Too deep conversation to be playing with dolls
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K.Rice
Nice attempt...but not a lot happening...and very floaty
Richard Adams
Well, you've certainly got the Barbie influence going strong, here! LOL. Cool and unique scenario idea you came up with. Animation is..not great, rather stiff and restrained, but reasonably decent. I liked the facial expressiveness. Have you looked up "The 12 Principles of Animation" on Youtube yet?
Katie Greenwood
Love the creativity of one character being both voices! My one suggestion would be to exaggerate the movements a bit more so it’s clear which doll has which lines. Like, if you were to play with dolls, they wouldn’t just stand and have a conversation, they would be bopping as they speak or sort of leaning towards each other. Excellent job overall!
Pierre Guerineau
cool idea