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Monkey Mischief

by Jasmine Austria

Final Rating: 5.68. Finished #24 out of 69 entries.

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Animator

Jasmine Austria

Experience

student

Time Taken

one month

Description

an orangutan tries to stop a pirate from running away with treasure

Comments

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Yolanda

The female character’s facial expression and lip syncing are really good. However, it feels strange that a small ball breaks the entire ship. It might help to add more keyframes to show the boat breaking gradually. Also, the gorilla should look scared immediately after the ship breaks, not a few seconds later.

Eddy Osborne

Cute concept, but quite unrendered, and the ship breaking like that isn't very belieable.

John Alston

The actual wreck is terribly animated- but the characters are very expressive, almost to the point of seeming rotoscoped.

Pixar should hire this animator.

Antonio Marulevski

The monkey looks so guilty