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Mr. Clumsy
by Akanksha
Description
This is my very first challenge and work that ive done completely on my own without any guidance :) any critiques would be appriciated!
Comments
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Eddy Osborne
Animation is decent, but visually unappealing
John Alston
I feel like the animator was trying to use sexiness to distract from the stilted movements. Didn't work for me.
I admire the pretense of a title-card, though that might make for an uphill battle for the final judging slots.
Ritz
Animation needs a lot of improvement, especially body acting
Nicholas Green
Good idea with the kitchen cupboard, we've all been there!