sorry

Yolanda

I really like the staging of your animation and the use of two different shots. It adds nice visual variety. One thing to consider is the pointing gesture the female character makes when she says 'just go.' It feels a bit too literal, almost like an indicator, which comes off as a bit odd. You might try exploring other forms of body language to convey that she wants the person to leave. Something more emotionally driven could make the moment stronger. Hope that helps. Great work overall!

Eddy Osborne

Cute, but needs more rendering!

John Alston

The whole thing seems to be stuck on fast forward..I think more frame holds would do wonders.

Bella Kwong

It feels a bit unnatural when the characters pose, return to neutral, then pose again, when they take turns saying their lines. Nice job with the gestures though. I liked her face palm in the beginning.