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Ruined Dinner
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Lady tries to have a normal dinner while unexpectedly one tough looking guy ruins it by accident.
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Eddy Osborne
missing key frames
John Alston
I don't mind pencil tests but I want to see if I can follow the action.
The pencil lines are washed out and I have to squint to see the eyes of the characters.
I think a simple "brightness/contrast setting on a video player could improve it, but also there seem to be unfinished actions as well- the opening punch seems to be three frames.
Ricardo Roehe
The idea , poses , characters placement and facial expressions are all great ! With more inbetweening this would be awesome ! I really liked it !