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Ghostly Nose surgeon

by Thomas shirley

Final Rating: 2.72. Finished #206 out of 238 entries.

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Animator

Thomas shirley

Experience

i have some experience but not much

Time Taken

this animation took up 3 weeks

Description

This is about a ghost that wants a nose but he gets helped out by a friendly stranger.

Comments

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Sadie Buckley

Like the ghost changing colour when he becomes happy

Austin Hambrick

i like it the theme is nice just wish it didnt seem like it was in slow motion it is good however keep up the work.

Alex Sinclair

Really nice idea, though the animation is quite choppy. Using lines of action should help you get a more "ghost-like" movement in the mustachioed ghost.

Cory Parks

Cool designs!

Reginald Crumpler

Colorful but it needs work. ; )

Nice effort. : D

JONG H. GOH

wow unknown creatures, interesting

Katie Wyman

The characters and story is cute, but your animation skills have a long way to go.
Look up some some tips on animation theory, and practice drawing more. there are plenty of tutorials and animator interviews online I think you could really benefit from watching. Find animations and animated shots you like, and ask yourself 'Why do I like this?' all the time. But above all, keep drawing. You'll only get better and better :)