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Unneeded advice
2 officeworkers in an elevator, one is fired and receives (unneeded) advice.
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Leonardo Pereira
Lovely. Maybe at the beginning are too stiff, but lovely acting!!!
Marni
I liked the hair floppy-s.
Paula Decanini
The emotions of the characters read clearly, and I like the acting animation of the speaker. Probably my biggest problem with this is just the camera framing. Maybe not so straight-on? Also you should always try to avoid cutting off your subjects mid-thigh. Keep it at the hips or the knees.
Héctor Lozano
The hair movement is really good, congrats on that.
Mic
Good interaction, like that you took the other guy through a change in emotion
Moy Parra
Top 5 no doubt!
philipp seis
very believable, i learned a lesson :)
Richard Carrillo
Very nice!
You have a clear situation and you are one of the few who don't put a cigarrete or something in the hand of the speaker flying all over the place.
GJ!
Divyam Chand
very nice acting......him going out in the end looks floaty....the walk should have up & down
Anand Mohan
NICE...
Blond
nice work here!
Sofia Pagen
If there is something that I saw in this entry that has stood out from all others I have seen, is acknowledging the character's breaths. Also, this entry is great proof that great animation doesn't mean a LOT of moment. There's so much going on this scene, really gives me the vibe it belongs in a greater plot. Excellent work pal!!!
javiermarimon
really nice!
JONG H. GOH
nice animation, facial is also nice
sashank
nice. the expression change before he starts speaking is cool
Abel
beautiful animation, for me you are the best of the month ! congrats
Jez
looks like somebody's sent packing ... a good job... i mean animating...lol
nicolas bougere
great
Benjamin Berg
The acting in this shot is good. The two biggest problems I can see is that the right guy's body is way too still and feels frozen. The other thing is the eyebrows on the left character are too floaty.
Keep up the hard work!





