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Unneeded advice

by Eike Hoppmann

Final Rating: 7.13. Finished #7 out of 238 entries.

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Animator

Eike Hoppmann

Experience

few years

Time Taken

10-20 hours...

Description

2 officeworkers in an elevator, one is fired and receives (unneeded) advice.

Comments

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Leonardo Pereira

Lovely. Maybe at the beginning are too stiff, but lovely acting!!!

Marni

I liked the hair floppy-s.

Paula Decanini

The emotions of the characters read clearly, and I like the acting animation of the speaker. Probably my biggest problem with this is just the camera framing. Maybe not so straight-on? Also you should always try to avoid cutting off your subjects mid-thigh. Keep it at the hips or the knees.

Héctor Lozano

The hair movement is really good, congrats on that.

Mic

Good interaction, like that you took the other guy through a change in emotion

Moy Parra

Top 5 no doubt!

philipp seis

very believable, i learned a lesson :)

Richard Carrillo

Very nice!
You have a clear situation and you are one of the few who don't put a cigarrete or something in the hand of the speaker flying all over the place.
GJ!

Divyam Chand

very nice acting......him going out in the end looks floaty....the walk should have up & down

Anand Mohan

NICE...

Blond

nice work here!

Sofia Pagen

If there is something that I saw in this entry that has stood out from all others I have seen, is acknowledging the character's breaths. Also, this entry is great proof that great animation doesn't mean a LOT of moment. There's so much going on this scene, really gives me the vibe it belongs in a greater plot. Excellent work pal!!!

javiermarimon

really nice!

JONG H. GOH

nice animation, facial is also nice

sashank

nice. the expression change before he starts speaking is cool

Abel

beautiful animation, for me you are the best of the month ! congrats

Jez

looks like somebody's sent packing ... a good job... i mean animating...lol

nicolas bougere

great

Benjamin Berg

The acting in this shot is good. The two biggest problems I can see is that the right guy's body is way too still and feels frozen. The other thing is the eyebrows on the left character are too floaty.

Keep up the hard work!