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Smashing Advice

by Marc Gordon

Final Rating: 2.97. Finished #190 out of 238 entries.

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Animator

Marc Gordon

Experience

beginner student

Time Taken

3 weeks

Description

Don't say the wrong things when you're a psychiatrist to the stars.

This was done by a group of students in their first ever animation class.

Comments

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Alex Sinclair

Hulk cameo aside, the animation of the character giving advice seems really tired and boring. I suggest adding more emotion in the face, even if it's just a few blinks or eyebrow movements here and there - every bit counts.

Mic

Fun idea but a lot of floating motion. Tie things down and get the action purposeful and punchy.