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Too Late

by Jez

Final Rating: 3.76. Finished #142 out of 238 entries.

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Animator

Jez

Experience

a bit

Time Taken

the last weekend before death line

Description

Too Late

Comments

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philipp seis

nice idea. The gestures are not bad, but are drawing too much attention to themselves. The idea with the bush is nice :)

Richard Carrillo

Feel like too much arm movement.

Nathanael Xavier

full points for the concept....needs a lot more work in terms of animation! :)

Blond

Great setting however i sense a bit of rotoscopy in this.

Cory Parks

Wow, his movements seem so natural. I wonder what he's in though? I'm gonna ignore his lack of talking cause of how nicely done the rest is.

Reginald Crumpler

Interesting.

Jez

All right, all right a lesson learned a weekend before the deadline wasn't enough
to hand animate the upper body full of muscles & lip-sync. Especially when the Earth is moving making all my lines shaky...lol...but still I wanted to show my idea & wondered if anyone came with anything similar. I've also promised myself that I upload my clip no matter what stage it would be. So it needs a lot of clean up, the shot should be MS (Mid Shot) the ending shot ought to be WS (Wide Shot) better staged/organized as well longer not 1 sec (it was still time after a dialogue to add
3 or 4 sec to make a point. I'm going to finish it & show to my religious friends, perhaps they will get a kick out of it...there u have it..cheers ...
don't take me too seriously... animation mostly should be fun