Advising

Cordelia Garcia

weird camera change! but liked it!

Piotr Skulimowski

Great animation, but there's sth wrong with this camera cut.

Mariana Avila

I like the switching POV, very original

Paula Decanini

Mouth shapes while speaking with the cigarette in the lips are good, but the cigarette needs to bounce and wobble more. The cut to the straight-on view is jarring. Keep it to one camera and frame the composition a little more interestingly.

Cory Parks

The finger waving is a little distracting to me, he seems to do one too many times. That camera cut is a little jarring too, unnecessary. Nice animation regardless!

Janzelle

The hand movement was pretty distracting from the animation as a whole. He waved that cigarette a bit too much.

Jim

Good animation. I feel like it's a little bit overacted in the hand gestures. The head movement at the end on "while you're upset" feels extreme.

Amartya Mukherji

the camera switch is jittery.

Richard Carrillo

The camera cut feels really weird, maybe a moving camera would fit it better.
Nice animation, my only concern is that cigarrete I've seen in 7/10 entries, it's becoming really cliche and uncreative (dunno if that's a word).
GJ!

Eleftherios Kokkinakis

I love the hands movement! Good work. I would like to see some reaction from the other guy too and maybe a different camera angle or no change at all.

JONG H. GOH

nice background, but I personally don't like when it moves onto the 2nd shot. I felt rather it was too sudden, and so the scene feels disconnected.