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WRONG TIME, WRONG PLACE...

by Talha

Final Rating: 3.84. Finished #137 out of 238 entries.

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Animator

Talha

Experience

1.5 years

Time Taken

5 hour

Description

Wrong time and wrong Place to give an advice.

Comments

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philipp seis

striking ending :)

Artistico

Great !!

Ben LaScala

Would have been stronger without film gate. And the lip sync is a bit off. I think it is because he closes his mouth at each pause. other wise good work, not clear on the context though.

Austin Hambrick

gotta give props for trying to animate something with a muzzle little more tweaking and your good.

Katie Wyman

I see where you were going with the body language, but you character still looks very stiff. I'm afraid the lip since lets this animation down and needs a lot of work.

Cory Parks

I think you should push the mouth shapes more. He seems to only use one throughout the clip. The story is a little weird too, I don't know about you, but this doesn't seem like the time or place for this conversation. :P Funny idea though.

Paula Genta

Balto??

Jez

LOL love the ending ...ha ha ha