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You're smash guy
I had little problems with Malcolm's facials in Maya 2015 :(, no eyebrows or mouth moved in render, but in blayblast yes...
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Sarah Johnson
He's doing a bit too much talking with his hands. Try to get the face to convey the ideas and not the hands so much.
Patrick Verlangieri
Good work.
The animation is descent and the idea is cool but the character is overacting at several points that makes the character action a bit to artificial (almost as if the character was a lousy actor reading a script).
I think it helps if you think on a golden pose and work from it.
Cheers
Moy Parra
Less hands dude....
Paula Decanini
Way overanimated.
ibet francisco
Too many poses. Less is more.
Luis Trebino
too much movment
philipp seis
too much going on. But not a bad concept.
Leonie Isaacs
Great animation but a bit too floaty in some places
Clement
Poses are here, but not rythm
Janzelle
Love it XD
JONG H. GOH
HULK action needs to be a lot snappier, doesn't feel like it's a strong hit.
Richard Carrillo
Those arms must be tired hehe, I think he moves his arms way too much and it's not a very energetic dialogue, just imagine this same character when he becomes angry or excited, his hands would hit every wall. Remember, exaggeration is not only Bigger, Larger, it's also Smaller, Lower.
Something very outstanding from this is the grabbing of the cup. I see a tendency in these entries of grabbing some unneccesary items when speaking, in many cases it adds appeal and secondary action but in many cases it's very nonsense and feels like a way to scape from hand work. You really made it work by having him drink before speaking, it gives a porpose to that cup. Good one.
Also, the hulk hit was very weak :S
GJ overall :)
Yurika Nishi-Imai
Trying to give an advice to the Hulk?....Oh Batman...
Eleftherios Kokkinakis
U got my attention sir because of batman! Too much movement imo
Jyrki Kanto
:D Batman seems to be really nervous because he keeps moving all the time. I love it when he taps the table with his fingers. Good job!
Eddie Mendez
love the animation, but for me it seems like the lip sync is a bit off or doesnt match all that well
Reginald Crumpler
Funny! : D