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Bathroom Pep Talk

by keaton

Final Rating: 3.25. Finished #174 out of 238 entries.

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Animator

keaton

Experience

Beginner Experience. Student

Time Taken

One Week

Description

This is an animation for the November competition. This is a boy giving himself a talk in the gym locker room/bathroom.

Comments

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low treb

the camera is too weird

Cory Parks

What's the decision about and why is he not upset? Not to be mean, but those are key things you can have taken advantage of. Ok animation though, keep going!

Tobias Fuhr

i didn't understand the first camera, and care with change camera in a long turns... try to make more poses than only moves the head... congratulations by the entry, keep animating

Reginald Crumpler

Great use of camera, and the mirror effect was awesome. But a bit more work on lip syncing.