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Goobies

by Cory Parks

Final Rating: 4.35. Finished #105 out of 238 entries.

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Animator

Cory Parks

Experience

No professional experience, former student

Time Taken

2 weeks

Description

Someone needs a chill pill...

Comments

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philipp seis

refreshing aesthetics

Ben LaScala

So I get that he is upside down at the start but its not till later that I realize this. I would start him upside down. But other wise I really like this good job!

Paula Decanini

Have him hanging upside down from the beginning. Otherwise it's confusing as to why his arms are stuck in the air. The reveal of him being captured by a monster is not that valuable.

JONG H. GOH

nice drawings, but better shooting / compositing would've made it heaps better.

Richard Carrillo

Nice idea but it need a bit more work, more frames.

Katie Wyman

It's nice to see some traditional animation in this competition. I know your character is meant to be upside down but I still feel like his arms are too static. I think practice drawing foreshortening would help you a lot too.