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Goobies
by Cory Parks
Someone needs a chill pill...
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philipp seis
refreshing aesthetics
Ben LaScala
So I get that he is upside down at the start but its not till later that I realize this. I would start him upside down. But other wise I really like this good job!
Paula Decanini
Have him hanging upside down from the beginning. Otherwise it's confusing as to why his arms are stuck in the air. The reveal of him being captured by a monster is not that valuable.
JONG H. GOH
nice drawings, but better shooting / compositing would've made it heaps better.
Richard Carrillo
Nice idea but it need a bit more work, more frames.
Katie Wyman
It's nice to see some traditional animation in this competition. I know your character is meant to be upside down but I still feel like his arms are too static. I think practice drawing foreshortening would help you a lot too.





