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A bit of advice

by Stephane Sourdeval

Final Rating: 5.02. Finished #69 out of 238 entries.

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Experience

1 year as student

Time Taken

around 2 weeks

Description

A man give an advice!

Comments

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Ben LaScala

Really strong! I love this! So entertaining. Good job!

Paula Decanini

Too many gestures, consider removing a few. Also add more variety in poses. The hands coming together happens to frequently and not always on the right beats.

Diane Aarts

nice fluid gestures

Mic

Like the amount of connection the character is making with the off screen one. Maybe a tad too much hand motion but well done.

Jim

a lot of repetitive poses

tatiana tchoumakova

Great first part, second part less good

Amartya Mukherji

hands are moving a bit too much may be..

very nice animation though

Edy Zet

Nice aniation. It would be more powerful if you explore non repetitive actions and make some accent in pauses

JONG H. GOH

maybe some overlapping needed