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DISAPPOINTED
Description
The title says it all....i'm disappointed with the animation...its unfinished...but still i dont want to waste the effort and so i uploaded it...please watch and criticize....:-)
Comments
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Piotr Skulimowski
Animation is getting somewhere. Keep up with the work. Story makes no seance.
Cory Parks
The story isnt very clear. Once you have that I think this would be pretty solid.
Reginald Crumpler
That folding of the arms at the beginning wasn't really necessary. Overall, pretty good.
Mic
Glad to see you working towards a lot of secondary motion. Still try to strip some of it away and rebuild it up carefully so that all of it is purposeful.