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Stomp
by Matt Smith
Max confronts his demon.
Comments
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Owen Fern
Would have been nice to see his face
Tobias Fuhr
i can't see his face and the poses are strange.
Héctor Lozano
There's no story or apparent background and the "monster" or "dinosaur" should at least be moving a little after the stomp.
Richard Carrillo
Nice trick to avoid Lipsync heheh, anyways this is not ready for a competition, no hand movement, no dragon movement, too much arm movement and nonsense in some parts. Also the scene is strange, how can he talk to a dragon just like that? where are they? what is happening?. You didn't even make a render. But it's good that you made the effort, keep going and practive, have fun!
Alex Mlqd
This is an acting and lipsync exercice...try to show the face and expressions, feelings of your characters next time.
Katie Wyman
Body movements seemed more theatrical then natural. I didn't feel as though the character was scared, despite the plot, but the concept of the situation did make me laugh. In future, treat your character like a person (what would he/she do? What is he/she thinking?) and body language will naturally come with getting in your character's mindset.
Filipe Pedrosa
I like the idea, but the camera angle seriously kills it. I can't see his face and expressions, and the body language alone doesn't pull it off for me.
Janzelle
You should really show the face.
JONG H. GOH
I think Norman could have jumped when the big foot hits the ground





