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I'm not afraid
by Tan Xue Yee
Description
class assignment.
Comments
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William Barry Eggington
Not bad but. . . seems like a lot more work could be done. Are they making proper eye contact? That is very distracting.
David Barrow
No real story, but good acting.
Jo Anne Tan
Too much floatiness, and their spines are really stiff. Don't use only the COG control to make them bend over, the spine is really important to create strong poses and not make them look like wooden planks bending at the hinges.