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The Rookie Cleaner
by Phill Clough
The New employee is tasked with cleaning the toilets. However his boss has some doubts.
(This is my first attempt at the competition)
Comments
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Nicolás Burmester
Amazing concept! For future animations try to breakdown your poses a little more. Because now you can clearly see when your keyframes are and what is being intepolated by the software. Keep it up!
David Barrow
Pretty good acting and a good idea. It may just be the camera angle, but the green guys pose looks like he would fall over. Also, I had to go back and look to see that he hadn't gone through the mop handle when he reached for it. Maybe a little more arc to the motion would have made it clearer.
William Barry Eggington
Stiff. Center of gravity problems.
Jo Anne Tan
Funny idea! But the fundamentals are lacking and everything is too stiff. Keep practising!