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freaked out

by Adam Porcelli

Final Rating: 2.68. Finished #200 out of 223 entries.

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Animator

Adam Porcelli

Experience

just a bit, took a class or 2 on animation

Time Taken

roughly 4 days

Description

"luke" gets freaked out by random "yoda"

Comments

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Nicolás Burmester

Hey! Try to add some holds to your animation :) You dont need everything to be moving the entire sequence. That way you will have more time to play with timings! Like when your character hits the table with his fist, anticipate it and then make it hit the table quickly with the hand and then overlap the torso and the head.

Victoria Barranco

Watch the timing and snappiness of some of the movements, particularly the slamming of the fist on the table. I like the floating character though.

William Barry Eggington

Very stiff and the timing seems quite off.

Nick Kondo

liked the unexpected entrance! maybe double down on the comedy by having them poke out upside down or something ;)