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I won't fail you

by Andrea Lamadrid Zertuche

Final Rating: 3.56. Finished #125 out of 223 entries.

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Experience

4 months

Time Taken

3 days

Description

Animation by Andrea Lamadrid Zertuche

Comments

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Aldric

Jaja had a really similar idea.

David Alin

cool intention! but it needs more work.

Samantha Schnauder

camera anim is a little confusing, as I thought the guy standing up was the one talking at first as the camera was centered-ish on him. Good anim :)

William Barry Eggington

distracting camera motions.

David Barrow

Nice touch with the third character.

Jo Anne Tan

The camera moves around unnecessarily way too much, and there is a lot of empty dead space in your staging. Also the first guy's eyes are floating and looking into all sorts of directions rather than at the second guy.