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Not sure you won't fail
A young man tries to charm a girl, but her Dad is not far.
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Jed B.
Eye twitch is a nice touch.
Bradley Adams
needs more shake to emphasize the anger
Nicolás Burmester
Really liked they idea, didn't see that ending coming! I'd pay more attention to he eye movement because they are kind of floaty, try to make them move faster and keep them on the same place for minimum 8 frames.
Juan Carlos Vigil
I like the idea, there's a weird movement in the arms of the dad.
William Barry Eggington
Who is he looking at? Good idea though.
Sandeep Kumar Kispotta
gr8 idea.....but needs a lot of improvement on Mechanics and Expressions too....
Jo Anne Tan
be careful with eyelines, Casanova's eyes are looking far too high up over the girl's head and the father's eyes point into two different directions. Also the animation is rather slow and floaty a lot of the times and the expressions could be a lot more exaggerated for a better comedic effect