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Family
Description
It's about a father who tells his wife that he won't fail her and he's not afraid. The wife tells him that he'll be, and the baby as well.
Comments
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William Barry Eggington
Stiff and poppy.
Amy Hook
Watch out for arcs, as people never move in straight lines. So add arcs to the heads as they turn, and push his arm gesture. Make it a more sweeping motion. I do love the story here though :D And that zoom on his expression at the end. Marvellous!
Jo Anne Tan
Interesting premise, but you're lacking a lot of the fundamentals. Everything moves linearly and is stiff, and each limb moves one after the other. Keep studying the fundamentals and practice