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Hope Floats

by Michael A. Ryfinski

Final Rating: 3.15. Finished #161 out of 223 entries.

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Experience

5 years student animator

Time Taken

Two weeks

Description

My animation for the November Competition. Looking for constructive criticism and feedback.

Comments

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David Barrow

Love the way he looks in the stall first. Movements seem a little computery. Needs anticipation, ease in, etc. Also his hand on the plunger around frame 122 is awkward.

William Barry Eggington

Seems like you have poses that aren't too bad but the motion is quite robotic and un-natural.

Lady Musician

Movements are very rigid. Work on the fluidity of the transitions between animations. (Love how you used the "ugghh" sound!). Background is plain, too.

Amartya Mukherji

ha ha ha. Not the best animation but the funniest one for sure.