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Mafia

by Jamshid Noori

Final Rating: 3.97. Finished #93 out of 223 entries.

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Animator

Jamshid Noori

Experience

5 years

Time Taken

one week

Description

He is not honest to the boss

Comments

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Domenic Serena

Audio slows for some reason

William Barry Eggington

Black eyes?

John Fielding

i wish the second shot was super tight on him, but overall this is the first submission i've seen that seems to have a legit setting that matches the tone of the clip.

The big guy could use more body mechanics and overlapping parts in the way he swivels in the chair and in the turn. In the professional world, this would be a great first pass to build upon and add subtleties and nuance