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I am not afraid

by Bernardo Hdz Blackaller

Final Rating: 2.82. Finished #192 out of 223 entries.

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Experience

6 Months

Time Taken

Few days

Description

Luke is being intimidated by the receptionist of the hotel.

Comments

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Bradley Adams

I think the camera needs reworking to allow you to emphasize certain gestures and phrases, nice lip sync. Try and focus on gestural and body movement to give actions emphasize.

William Barry Eggington

Seems you have a ways to go to get good clean motion but I can see the fundamentals.