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Do not go in

by Maurizio Villafagna

Final Rating: 3.60. Finished #119 out of 223 entries.

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Experience

Four months.

Time Taken

Around two weeks.

Description

In this scene we can see character 1 showing braveness telling character 2 that he's not afraid of going inside the door. His bravery will last no longer when character 2 threats him by telling him that if he do it, he'll be afraid.

Comments

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Ana L.

Lori WH

Larry Bryant

Very good start so far.

Work on the lip sinc. a bit more. The turn around is a bit to smooth.
The old man's animation needs quite a bit of work. Its to pose-to-pose right now. Remember your slow ins and slow outs with him. You seem to have a good grasp on your principles with the main guy. Reflect them more on the older man.

Sabrina Winkel

I like how at the end the character had this fear on his face.

William Barry Eggington

Very stiff. Pose. . . drift. . . pose. . .