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I Won't Fail You
A young man swears his loyalty.
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Jaimee Cowart
The only thing i have for critic is that the first segment could be a little smoother but over all really good. Good job :)
Nicolás Burmester
Love to see someone using Blender! The "I won't fail you" part is beautiful but then you ruined your silhouette doing that "i'm not afraid" pose. Instead of that, you could have rotated/leaned your character forward to make him look more courageous, since "he's not afraid". And for the guy at the table, the first "you'll be" is a little stiff but still works, while the second one just doesn't. Again, you could have placed the hands a little further and then stand up or something.
Good work!
Isaac Bautista
The first guy could use some overlap, his whole body moves at the same time when he gets up. He also remains very still after that action.
The second guy's body is very static, I like the acting with the face but his body is too still at first. Also one of his fingers suddenly snaps.
William Barry Eggington
Those are some big eyes. Turn the seed value on for the noise in blender.