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Star Journey

by Fernando

Final Rating: 2.60. Finished #202 out of 223 entries.

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Animator

Fernando

Experience

1 year

Time Taken

3 weeks

Description

Our hero is about to embrace his destiny and go on a Star Journey!

Comments

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Aldric

Cool idea but thats a lot of camera movement, I get that you are trying to have some action going on, but its really distracting and you can hardly see whats going on.

Rodger D. Davis

Too much action with the camera. Lip sync didn't match the audio.

Friska Bako

Camera is a bit hectic, I can't see the animation much. :( sorry.

Isaac Bautista

The camera is moving way too much.

Juan Carlos Vigil

Camera moves WAY too much!!

Phill Clough

Camera moves too much

William Barry Eggington

Wowoa. Go easy on that camera motion. Can barely tell what is going on.

Lady Musician

Too much movement going on during the dialogue sections. Would have the brunt of the action happen before!

Melissa

The camera is moving to much.

Jo Anne Tan

I can barely concentrate on the animation because the camera moves around too much. Keep things simple. This would probably work for a very action-y fight scene, but it doesn't work for this dialogue.