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First Day
Description
A young man tries to console his elderly relative and let him know he is confident and unafraid. But the old man knows better...
Comments
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Jaimee Cowart
no bad things animation is great
Sabrina Winkel
haha I love this!! The story line is nice. The kid is talking about High School and the grandpa is telling him that High School is a roller coaster
William Barry Eggington
Not too bad.
Lady Musician
I love the twist. Animation movements need improvement (fluiditiy)
Jo Anne Tan
Good acting and nice flow throughout the scene, just needs tightening on the moving holds and the floaty parts when the respective characters don't speak.