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You should be afraid
by Tami
The characters were downloaded from the website "Blend Swap".
File: http://www.blendswap.com/blends/view/61707.
License: http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/3.0/
Comments
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Friska Bako
It looks dramatic with this black and white. For animation maybe you can ease in and out the animation, move the body as well so not just the head. To make it more lively.
David Barrow
Lip sync not bad, but that's about all I can comment on. Needs more movement and reaction.
William Barry Eggington
Kind of a neat stop motion look. I like that.
Lady Musician
Love the silhouette on the models! Movements are a little rigid.
Samidha Kumar
this has a stop motion feel to it...is it 3D?
Jo Anne Tan
Animation is too stiff and jerky, check your curves in the graph editor.
Jay Vacík
no offense but i suggest you should make more hand gestures