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The Liar
Description
First time to let the character speak. If you have time to give me some advice, I will very appreciated! :)
Comments
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Isaac Bautista
Very floaty.
David Barrow
Life his little finger twirl and his expression on his second statement. Just needs more movement to make them look less stiff.
Gina Zarco
Take care about the composition of your frame.
William Barry Eggington
Seems cut off or stretched or something. Strange. Parts are done well. Like his motion into the desk on his chair. But the rest is a little lifeless.