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Job

by Jason Lu

Final Rating: 6.30. Finished #20 out of 266 entries.

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Animator

Jason Lu

Experience

1.5years

Time Taken

about10days ani

Description

A girl was called into the office.The boss was playing his pen.

Comments

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Luis Trebino

too dark

Arun Kumar

Nice...Shots are well arranged....!

Shawshaank

It gets confusing after she says her dialogue again. Have some more change in expressions.

Leon Lawdumrongwong

Nice animation! I really like the way your light your shot. However, the character placement is really confusing. The man should be on the right side of the screen and the girl can be move a little to the left.

Verba Natasha

I like your lighting. It's nice!

Sabrina Winkel

Wow that was awesome!!

Evelyn Hernandez

has a nice cinematic feel.

Hamza Jassar

"You're offering me a job" should've been the exact opposite of frustration.
But still, well done!

Franco Odeny

too dark facial hiding animation