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She'll try everything to get this job but he doesn't want to and can't just say it)
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Shawshaank
A little floaty but nice acting choices. Tighten up your timing a bit.
David Maguire
I think the guy is pretty well done, but the lady could use a bit more work. Her head hits a wall at f41, which makes the return to a more neutral position awkward. I'm also not really understanding the last 2 poses. I'm not sure what her emotions or thoughts are, and the mouthing at the end is very confusing. In contrast, the guy's face and body are working well together and I have a clear read of his thoughts/emotions the whole time.
Jayshri
Too Much Movements in Girl
Arun Kumar
Good job...!
Verba Natasha
Oops! It looks like a mug, a cigar, a paper and general sitting pose was bad idea( Too many times I've saw those stuff during voting(
Franco Odeny
Are you thinking about it or looking at her (a bit off on the line)





