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Surprise Offer
by Gary Seto
Girl is surprised of being offered a job.
(Animated in spare time after work)
Comments
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Angela Colvin
clean up your curves.
Kevan Balmer
Nice planning so far. I like the thinking and pause around frame 99. I really like how the the lady moves in her seat. The circular movement from the guy's upper body from 74 happens twice all the way to frame 135. I think this would be better if it wasn't repeated. Maybe one move straightforward followed by a circular move. Don't forget to animate the lower back to lead the rest. His hand on the table could have a more dynamic pose with root finger knuckles up and have the tips curl back from pressing on the table.