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Any improvements, corrections and suggestions are really welcome. I would like to know where I can improve and what I need to avoid.
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Carolyn Mennecke
Don't move her around as much once she puts her hands on the table
Yoni Audi
Nice work!
Shawshaank
I guess this is unfinished due to the floatiness, but would have been a cool entry if finished
Juuso Kallioinen
There seems to be a bit too many cuts for such a short time. I would consider leaving the last cut out. On a positive note I'd say you were successful in portraying the characters personalities and making them believeable.
rahul rishikesh
Camera change is too much distraction. Timing is ok. Need clean up. Ease in ease out, cushions, pose need work. Pose not well balanced. Good attempt!
Hardik
Her right hand on MORE Edge of table could be nice.
Angela Colvin
Where are his textures?
Franco Odeny
i like the way he pulled his head back that was great.