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Swordsmith Apprentice
by Lucas Ridley
Description
A hopeful kid takes his chances on following his dream
Comments
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Yoni Audi
Great!
Juuso Kallioinen
The last gesture on the big guy seems threatening, as he is nearly hammering the kid on the head. This suggests that it's the intention of the big guy, which seems odd if he was to hire her.
VanG
You get a good rating
Arun Kumar
Good job..!
Please make that boy's hat more visible.Its hard to find out and make him squeeze that hat harded to show his nervous,just suggestions.Nice composition.
Good luck..!
David
Nice timing but the acting is over the top.