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Up Close
Description
Possible employee gets too close.
Comments
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DaoYee Tan
simple and clean! nice
Yoni Audi
Nice animation :)
Juuso Kallioinen
The characters come across nicely and there is some good staging, clear poses and expressive movement, good job! What worries me though is how fast he pushes her off - instinctly I'm afraid he'd stab her in the eye. Instead gradually pressing her off would've looked nicer.
Verba Natasha
Idea is great!
As for me it could be better with some resistance of screen left character when screen right is pushing him back!