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Offering a Job
by Arun Kumar
Description
An assassination leader offering a job to this girl.
Comments
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David Maguire
Like the story! The guards outside are a nice touch. You've got too many static poses, though. You've got little anticipations before he changes pose each time which add a little bit of life, but you need to keep the poses alive with a little bit of settling or easing until the next move.
Arun Kumar
Huh?
Franco Odeny
Not bad like it, just the "Thinking about it" show facial thought. but good





