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A Job
by Erik Dfocus
Much experience not very good :)
crazy month so maybe two weeks average
Just trying to have some distraction in a crazy month. And having some fun!
Comments
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Juuso Kallioinen
You can do nice cartoony movement, but what takes place is the acting. In this instance, the characters motivations do not come across.
Jayshri
No Girl Animation
Verba Natasha
I like his cartoon movements! It's funny!
And as for me I want to see something with the girl. I mean some changes in the pose during shot.
And his hand guesture in 160-180 doesn't match his other movements. It's too slow. And his head is a little bit to rubbish in 207-214
Evelyn Hernandez
there's a lot of great moments here.
Would of been fun to also see the little girl animated with as much energy as he was maybe or at least, both to a more similar degree.
Franco Odeny
to far 4 our view & over acting