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Reluctant
by Don Dixon
A kid who is seeing through a tough guy's rough exterior.
Comments
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PRIYA RANJAN DEB
" Doesn't pay Much ! " You can keep the character inside ,till frame no. 130, to show his expression.... your acting choice is nice.
Emmanuel G.
Wow, I really like the characters. Excellent drawings. Good work.
ro crown
Now that u added the background, from the WIP stage.....a bit hard to read the characters against this grey background....
but love the smooth action and follow thru's and the acting arc's are i feel spot on,,,,,great job,,,,should be up there in the top 10 or pehaps even the winner for this month.....hope to see more of you in future compettions here on 11 sec club.
Franco Odeny
Not bad





