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November Competition
Description
tried to show an cleaner tired of his job, but his employer gets angry. The characters aren't mine, thanks to the owners.
Comments
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Daniel
The timing around frame 131, where the chef is pointing at the man, could be better emphasized if it were closer to the dialogue. However, the scene itself is interesting.
John Tyson
the first guy moves too suddenly and too fast, ease it in a bit more.
i love the throw for the second guy though and his follow up gesture, though he could use some better timing.