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Filthy
Its like The Odd Couple except with Rats
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Vighnesh Prabhu
lacks inbetweens at places ! Needs a lot of improvement .
Nathaniel Winckler
Haha! I laughed when the guy fell down. Good timing and spacing in that part. However, the body mechanics overall could use some beefing up.
Ramsey Pierson
You cut shots too much. Every time you cut your shots with the gray mouse he is in a different position, and it breaks my immersion while watching. Try and limit this animation to at most 3 shots at MOST, and anticipate your shots with actions. Good start!
Rukariro
When the other mouse falls on his way out the door:
Me: "BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!"
I easily laugh at anything. Nice animation! I love how it's so smooth and thorough. Although, I think you should work on the brown mouse's lip movement a bit more. Overall, nice creativity and animation!