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The dream

by Lecomte Steven

Final Rating: 5.88. Finished #29 out of 192 entries.

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Animator

Lecomte Steven

Experience

1year (Student)

Time Taken

2weeks

Description

An employee is dreaming about complaining alone of his job. But his boss heard him and yell at him.

Comments

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Mohit

You delayed the audio after peasant word

Hajar Khakrand

Only if the lipsync was better....

Nathaniel Winckler

Really good acting!! I love your choices and the idea was great. There were a few points where the spacing is too large (or it needs a smear frame): f75, f160, f180. It was so fast that it was almost indiscernible what was happening. Your lip sync also needs some improvement, especially for the very last line. Make sure he's enunciating those words. Great job!

Satya

Interesting.. :)

Haritz TZ

Animation is pretty good. But editing the audio is not allowed. Only adding time before and after audio is allowed. Just a reminder. It's in the rules btw.