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by Denise
Two men argue in an archaeological center
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Mohit
Second character's RIGHT HAND IS LOOKING WEIRD WHEN HE IS PUTTING IT ON HIS SPINE, volume problem is also there
Fabian
Cool acting. I would have exaggerated the facial expression in the angry guy. I really like the acting in the lazy one. May be there were missing some inbetweens to give it more fluidity but nice keys.
Ramsey Pierson
I like your character posing. Good job!
Daniel
I love the characterization of the first fellow through his swaying-hip movements, which are very smooth and almost natural. However, at around frame 21, where the second fellow is throwing the skull, it would have made a stronger impact (and also better reflect the sound) if he had thrown it at the already-established pile of skulls beside the first guy. The concept itself is interesting though!
Tara Howard
I really love the expression of their body language! This is great!
Brian W.
Really, really nice. I'd love to see a finished version.