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Luke at dis feels
A man tells to another man to look at this filth, because he is tired of living like a peasant, so the other man tells him to pick this place up, and tells him that he's gonna work today
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Harry Stein
must admit i laughed out loud at the bowling joke. +1 star for the idea!
Nathaniel Winckler
The facial expressions and some of the head accents are about right, but at the moment, the body is very disconnected. The whole body should always be involved in a performance. I will say, the situation/story makes very little sense. At one point the guy is on a bed, and in the next scene he's in a bowling alley.
ibrahim babur
cool idea but you need to think more about stageing.
Pallav Sharma
lipsync can be improved